*The Lesser Talisman* is incredible. As a fan of fantasy, I can tell you that you created a new and unusual world. You left Gandalf and Dumbledore our of your book. So many authors create derivative characters, which I find tiresome.
Your characters are well-developed, even the tiny ones.
I especially liked the multiple stories that became one at the end.
Your writing is very skillful, without so many of the trite expressions others use. I was completely enthralled with your story from beginning to end.
Thank you for a wonderful read!
James L Gillaspy 